DUNE BOOK CLUB :: Week 06!
Hello to all! I'm going to try to keep my usual over-verbosity in check this week somewhat--I'm really more interested in what YOU guys are thinking. I have had access to my own ideas about Dune for 20 years now, and yours are much more interesting. Especially when they lead to new Dune thoughts for me. Hey sue me, I'm selfish.
To that end, this week I'd like to focus on two points:
POINT THE FIRST: Frank Herbert does an interesting thing with his protagonist in Dune. We're at a point in the book's plot where Paul has been removed from the relative safety of his position as a duke's son, and now is moving headlong into his role as the center of legend, both existing and new.
Herbert handles this change with a series of crisis points in Paul's development--beginning with the gom jabbar in the first chapter, then progressing through various tests (flying into the sandstorm, eluding the sandworm, the fight with Jamis) along the way. Herbert builds things up in the internal world, and then they seem to erupt into real-world action. I hadn't really thought of this as much in earlier readings, but it's an interesting way to progress the story, both from a plot and a thematic point. It's not like a person's internal struggle with their own prescience always makes for the most gripping reading, but Herbert ties this struggle to the external struggle Paul has with his environment, the Fremen, his mother, etc.
When I was a kid we never went to movie theatres, so I read the Star Wars novelizations long before I ever saw the movies. I remember feeling almost breathless during the last half of The Return of the Jedi--the story kept switching from Admiral Ackbar with his massed Rebel fleet ("It's a trap!!") to Lando Calrissian flying into the Death Star ("We've got to give Han more time!!"), to Han and the Ewoks trying to break into the Imperial bunker on Endor. I know the Star Wars novelizations are hardly the best entry for pacing in a novel, but I am always thinking of them when I read books today, especially adventure books.
above, by Warren Craghead
In Dune Herbert seems to balance the internal world of Paul's prescience (and his growing fear of his own "terrible purpose") with the external world of the Fremen, conflict, the planet itself, etc. I think this is probably the thing that saves the book from the fate of its sequels, which are much more tilted to the idealogical side of things, and much less on adventure.
POINT THE SECOND (much shorter point): The scene where Jessica is taking the Water of Life and realizes that her unborn daughter is being exposed not only to her own consciousness, but the amassed experiences of the "corridor" of past Reverend Mothers that Ramallo pours into her... super important scene. This seems pretty mystical on the surface, as if some magical door opened up in Jessica's mind and there were all these old ladies in robes hanging out in there. Later I think Herbert tempers this a little bit, makes it more of a chemical/genetic transfer--it becomes hugely important later, both in this book and the later ones.
I can't help thinking that, while Herbert insists he had most of second and third books planned out before ever beginning Dune, this is one of the things he later had to retroactively refine. He revisits the idea (somewhat sloppily) of this idea of past lives existing within a person's genetic structure in Dune Messiah, and then perfects it in Children of Dune and God Emperor of Dune.
above, by Evan Dahm
Okay, sorry to keep mentioning later books. I admit that I have read ahead to the end, so I'm thinking about what comes next now a little bit. Sorry!
Questions: Count Fenring, am I right? I love that guy, I almost drew him this week, but I decided to go for the old lady instead. I thought in his scenes with Baron Harkonnen and Feyd-Rautha, he actually came off as much more dangerous than either of them. As I've said, I think Herbert does a bad job of making the antagonists in the book all that threatening. If Paul is going to turn into some sort of super-Messiah or something, then the bad guy needs to be pretty amazing, right?
I guess that was only one question, if you can even call it that. I'm running late here, and have already talked too much. I want to hear more from you guys though, you ask the questions this week!
And for next week: read to the end of the chapter where Paul thinks: "I will drown the maker. We will see now whether I'm the Kwisatz Haderach..."
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